Wow! This is completely amazing for a man to jump from a super high summit. I was completely stunned when i heard about this. This man is truly amazing and brave. He is certainly in attention now.
Grace - I'm glad to see you posted but I think you can do even better. Let's expand this paragraph. To do so, go to your posts, revert it to draft, then save and update when finished.
Elaborate. Why were you stunned? What makes him amazing? brave? Is it a good thing he as gained attention? I am not sure what you mean by, "He is certainly in attention now."
Grace - I'm glad to see you posted but I think you can do even better. Let's expand this paragraph. To do so, go to your posts, revert it to draft, then save and update when finished.
ReplyDeleteElaborate. Why were you stunned? What makes him amazing? brave? Is it a good thing he as gained attention? I am not sure what you mean by, "He is certainly in attention now."
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